development

Annoyingly half way through doing this collage, my screen went like this and I couldn't get rid of it, and hadn't saved it yet - again. So had to start over.

I think the red scribbles are a bit too much, they make the piece a little too convoluted.

Have settled on this composition for now, I am going to start on the other quotes and maybe come back to this one as I feel a bit stuck with it as I'm not sure it is really the style I want these illustrations to be.

I like the black + white buildings contrasting against the bright figures but I'm not sure about the background, I think it might be a bit too much.